Talking Texts with Deb & Jane: a review of Sue McPherson's "Brontide" for teachersTalking Texts with Deb & Jane: a review of Sue McPherson's "Brontide" for teachers

Brief description and distinctive features

For Stage 5

Brief description of Brontide:

This short novel (132 pages) will make a big impact in the Year 9 classroom. It’s the story of four boys, their schools, their coming of age and their sometimes, dangerous games. Rob is in Year 12, fifteen-year-old Pen is his brother, sixteen-year-old Indigenous Benny Boy is friends with Pen but doesn’t trust Rob, and Jack is white, seventeen, new to the area and adopted into a First Nations family. Over five days, we hear about their lives, through storytelling sessions with a visiting author. The boys are authentic and appealing with rude, humorous, and challenging dialogue that reveals the family fractures and the love and trouble in their lives. This is an accessible and gripping novel that will engage all readers, and especially reluctant or disengaged adolescent boys. Its ending will shock them. Sue McPherson’s Author’s Note cunningly reinforces the story’s gut-wrenching plausibility, so much so that I had to reassure myself that Taralune High did not exist.  It doesn’t, and this is a compelling work of fiction. Sue McPherson is a Wiradjuri/Irish/ Torres Strait islander. Reading Australia provides teaching notes at https://readingaustralia.com.au/lesson/brontide/

Distinctive features of Brontide:

  • The title refers to a low muffled sound like distant thunder. The sound can be heard in certain regions, especially along the coast and could be caused by earth tremors. 
  • The author, Sue McPherson, is the writer of the story, and also one of its characters. 
  • The narrative is compressed into a series of interviews by the author, with students at two different schools, who are taking part in a storytelling workshop. 
  • The Author’s Note at the beginning of the book, establishes the interview construct, as if it was a real transcript of a true story. 
  • Characters include Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islanders as well as non-indigenous Australians. 
  • This short, sharp novel (it takes place over five days) is intense and uses authentic teenage voices to explore racism, adolescence, friendship, families and teenage risk-taking.
  • Brontide is a powerful example of a text exploring youth culture and enabling adolescents to see themselves in the literature they explore in the classroom. 

Pre reading 

Read Cara Shipp’s Listening from the Heart: Rewriting the Teaching of English with First Nations Voices (2023 AATE 150pp) to explore better ways to engage with First Nations People and their stories, their history and culture and to understand the protocols and appropriate terminology to use when reading and studying texts by First Nation authors. This warm, wise and generous book will be a huge help in the classroom. 

Ways to use Brontide in the classroom

The title 

Brontide is first mentioned by Benny Boy, as “the thunder you hear miles away, that’s the brontide” p.60 and Sue doesn't know the word or its meaning. In many ways the brontide rumbles through the whole novel; undercurrents, tensions, anger and misunderstandings are rife in its pages. Ask students to find some examples of these “thunderings” and share them with the rest of the class. 

 

Group work on characterisation and class report 

Assign a specific character to each group and ask them to present a precis of their character’s words, actions and interactions with others to the rest of the class. They could start by looking at the character profiles of each of the four boys: Rob on page 1, Benny Boy on page 56, Jack on page 73 and Pen on page 122. One group should explore the character of the author. Students could also take the roles of the four boys in a hot seat and defend themselves against questions from the community based on Pen’s media feed.  

 

Group discussion re structure of the novel 

In an interview with Connor O’Brien, Sue McPherson explains why she chose to write the novel as a series of interviews. She said: 

As a reluctant reader in high school and an old book worm now, I specifically wanted to write a good yarn that anyone could access without getting bored. I tried writing Brontide in a normal format, but it felt flat and bored me to tears. I strongly believe the format was needed. Younger Sue would’ve loved Brontide. If I was given the option back in high school, maybe I would’ve fallen in love with books and words earlier.

Place students in groups to discuss the structure and interview format of the novel. What are its advantages and disadvantages? Consider the ways it represents teenage boys. Prompt students with what Pen says:

 “there are lots of spelling mistakes in the memorial page feed” (of his creative writing) “but that’s how I wanted it. That’s how we talk and text and write. You said to be authentic…”

Consider how McPherson achieves that authenticity. 

Relevant details in relation to the new English 7-10 syllabus

Text requirements: Brontide is a novel by Australian author Sue McPherson, who is an Aboriginal and Torres Strait Islander. Brontide contains intercultural and diverse experiences and cultural, social and gender perspectives, including from popular and youth cultures. 
For more recommended texts suitable for Stage 5, explore our Year 9 texts and study guides and Year 10 texts and study guides.

Concepts could include Characterisation • Perspective • Narrative.

 

Relevant NSW English 7-10 Syllabus content

A student uses a range of personal, creative and critical strategies to read texts that are complex in their ideas and construction EN4-RVL-01

  • Explore the main ideas and thematic concerns posed by a text for meaning
  • Explain personal responses to characters, situations and issues in texts, recognising the role of written, oral or visual language in influencing these personal responses Reflect on how reading promotes a broad and balanced understanding of the world and enables students to explore universal issues
  • Read texts selected to challenge thinking, develop interest and promote enjoyment, to prompt a personal response
  • Understand the ways reading helps us understand ourselves and make connections to others and to the world

(English K-10 Syllabus 2022 © NSW Education Standards Authority for and on behalf of the Crown in right of the State of New South Wales, 2023)

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